Global Water Use · Advertising and Consumer Needs.
Two tasks · 60 minutes · 150 and 250 words minimum. Adapted independent practice.
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Simplified practice redraw. Values and connecting trends are approximate; use the original book chart for exact visual comparison.
| Brazil | Democratic Republic of Congo | |
|---|---|---|
| Population | 176 million | 5.2 million |
| Irrigated land | 26,500 km² | 100 km² |
| Water consumption per person | 359 m³ | 8 m³ |
Water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000
Task 1: Global Water Use. Task 2: Advertising and Consumer Needs.
Allow 60 minutes in total: about 20 minutes for Task 1 and 40 minutes for Task 2.
Write at least 150 words for Task 1 and 250 words for Task 2.
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Format reference: IELTS Academic Writing format
The answer is well-organised and the message is easy to follow with clear paragraphing and linking of ideas. There are too many errors in cohesion, however, and some linkers are not always fully appropriate, so this limits the rating for this criterion.
A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and precisely, in spite of one or two awkward expressions and some rare errors. Similarly, a sophisticated range of structures is used but there are too many minor errors and omissions (such as in the use of prepositions and basic subject/verb agreement) to reach Band 8. Nevertheless these mistakes do not reduce the clarity of the answer and overall a wide range of language is used with a high level of proficiency.