Neighbour Party Letter · Computers and Young Children.
Two tasks · 60 minutes · 150 and 250 words minimum. Adapted independent practice.
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Task 1: Neighbour Party Letter. Task 2: Computers and Young Children.
Allow 60 minutes in total: about 20 minutes for Task 1 and 40 minutes for Task 2.
Write at least 150 words for Task 1 and 250 words for Task 2.
No. Word counts are practice guidance. The supplied samples and commentary are study material; their examiner attribution and band claims have not been independently verified.
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Format reference: IELTS General Training Writing format
The information is generally organised throughout the letter, but while there are one or two examples of good linking, there is a lot of omission, and also is used rather repetitively. As a result, sentences are not fluently linked and this limits the rating.
Vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the task although the range is not wide. The level of control is generally good with only a few spelling mistakes. The range of structures is limited and repetitive, however. There are one or two examples of complex structures used well, but overall there are lots of simple clauses that have inaccurate punctuation. This is a weak point of this answer.